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  • Which layout do you guys think i should use?

    Posted by Rod Gray on August 21, 2003 at 2:56 pm

    Hi guys,

    I`ve been staring at these all afternoon and can`t choose which one use based mainly on the yellow and beige colours used.

    Customer isn`t too fussy and has more or less left it up to me. (Makes a change eh?).

    Which one do you guys think i should use?

    As you can see, i don`t know if the yellow makes it look too "modern" and takes the old feel away.

    Thanks in advance.

    p.s. No prizes for guessing who`s influence is apparent on these signs 🙂

    Rod Gray replied 20 years, 8 months ago 6 Members · 10 Replies
  • 10 Replies
  • Phill Fenton

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 4:40 pm

    Top right does it for me. 😀 Nice one (as are the others – but this one is the best)

  • John Singh

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 4:47 pm

    Yeah!
    Top right for me
    The cream, towards beige, blends well with the rest

    The script in the first one has lost a little definition

    Yellow’s fine but the cream more subtle

    john

  • Mike Brown

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 4:48 pm

    I agree with Lorraine – top right but with cream infills all rounf on the title…

    more soon

    mikethesign

  • Ed Solheim

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 4:49 pm

    Top right…

    But whould it look better if you “filled” the W and S like in top left?

  • Rod Gray

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 6:40 pm

    Thanks guys,

    I also preferred the top right as i felt the yellow detracted from the “older” feel.

    i`m curious of one other thing though, did the weaved background pattern seem apparent to you guys when looking at the sign?. Or did anyone actually notice it?…..and if i hadn`t just mentioned it, do you think you`d have noticed?.

    /edit oh and i almost forgot, does anyone think i`ll get away with NOT having an apostrophe beteen r and s on Weaver’s?

    Thanks again

    Rod

  • Mike Brown

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 6:52 pm

    Can I be honest Rod and say – I thought they represented flagstones or tiles…I know, I know, the title is ‘Weavers’ but I’m gettin’ old!…?

    Maybe it’s because so much is obscured or maybe you need to use two subtly different shades to give an over-under feel to it?

    If you need any help – shout!

    more soon

    mikethsign

  • Rod Gray

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 7:07 pm

    Thanks for the feedback Mike, its like gold-dust.

    Looking at the jpg and looking at the cdl file i can see a huge difference which appears to be caused by screen calibration etc. I don`t really think the jpg does the signs any justice.

    On the cdl cut file, the colours are much clearer and more vibrant and perhaps show the weave pattern a little clearer. My frustration is that the machine and software i designed this on is not my own and althought the owner is a friend, i hate to think i`m imposing on anyone.

    I`m gonna need to save hard for Signlab so i can spend as much time as i like to tweak these little things. 😀

    I`ll post up a photo once the sign is complete.

    Thanks again for the feedback mate.

    Rod

  • Steve Thurlow

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 8:53 pm

    Yep, Mike said the same as I felt, I thought the background was tiles… I also go with top right, …. nice one,

    Steve

  • John Singh

    Member
    August 21, 2003 at 9:57 pm

    I’d put the apostrosphe there ONLY if the customer insisted
    otherwise it would upset the balance.

    Text in signs don’t have to follow convention

    We see in your own layout a Capital W and then at the end what appears to be a capital S. Yet it appears aesthetically pleasing

    Another example: In a sentence we may initial cap every word.

    John 🙂

  • Rod Gray

    Member
    August 22, 2003 at 4:16 pm
    quote Gray:

    Rod, you’ll hate me for saying so,

    Exactly the opposite mate. Constructive criticism is like gold dust. Without sounding melodramatic, i crave it. It wakens me to things i don`t see.

    I was unable to make the sign today due to some delivery hitches with Europoint but they colours of vinyl i`m using are very subtley different and in reality there isn`t quite the same dramatic change in colour tone and it looks quite effective.

    I`ll post the picture when i get it finished.

    Cheers

    Rod

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