what are your views on the layout of this fiesta van?

[Patrick Donaghey]

looks really well the only thing i would do is put a fine black outline on the text of the side windows so the text could be read easier and if that is the slogan they use i would try and make it a bit bigger but the customer probably want that

[Jill Marie Welsh]

I dislike the slant in systems….seems to be fighting against the word torque.
Not keen on that torque script at all either, but maybe that’s what they want.
Too many fonts for my taste, maybe make the services on the back the same font as systems.
The text on the windows should be readable as is.
love….Jill

[Phill Fenton]

I like the grey wavy line which conveys the image of a sports car – maybe the lettering could be distorted to fit within the "envelope shape" of the sports car 😀