vehicle signage: jif plumbing services

[autosign]

I really don’t like that font.

Maybe for the company name but not all the other text aswell.

[Neil Davey]

ooh no.

You need to use a different font for the secondary copy.

Vary the weight of the fonts too and leave some space at the edge of the lettering, don’t go so close to the door edge. Think margin!

I wouldn’t use red on the blue either.

The company name could come down the panel a smidgen too, bit too high.

hope this helps.

Neil 😕

[Nicola McIntosh]

great idea frank 😀 i like the thought behind the plastic pipes 😀

constructive crits. i have to agree with the other guys, a different secondary font and colour would suite the whole layout 😉

nik

[payads]

hi thanks 4 the crits, the company wanted the text in red, yellow and kumquat, there wasn’t any scope for changing text colour, i only had to create the logo for them.
they were well pleased at the result, also i got roofing companies 4 vans to design on the back of the jif van, as they liked the end result, just shows everybodys taste is different i guess.

frank