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  • Pizza Shop Logo / Shop Front Design

    Posted by Kyle Bennett on October 23, 2009 at 4:05 pm

    Any thoughts / opinions? Never really posted my work up to the masses on here before!

    Will be a door in between the 2 windows (Illustrator max artwork width wasn’t big enough to do the shop sign as long as it will be), and the right hand side window is to be covered in etch vinyl as the kitchen is that side.

    Colours will be Avery 764 Yellow and 770 Red

    Kyle


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    Simon Strom replied 14 years, 6 months ago 5 Members · 5 Replies
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  • Jill Marie Welsh

    Member
    October 23, 2009 at 4:24 pm

    I like the layouts a lot.
    But are these going on windows?
    Because both black and red do not show up well on glass.
    You may want to consider using a thin white outline around the black and red areas.
    Love….Jill

  • Glenn Sharp

    Member
    October 23, 2009 at 4:32 pm

    I’m finding it a bit difficult to read….as Jill says I would put a white outline around the black text but I think I would do away with the white inline as well

    I think I would also replace the word ‘AND’ with an ‘&’ but that might just be me

  • Chris Windebank

    Member
    October 23, 2009 at 4:34 pm

    nice warm colours, yellows, oranges instead of reds and black will look better

  • Kyle Bennett

    Member
    October 23, 2009 at 5:15 pm

    This place is only going to be open at night, hence the use of the red’s for the Takeaway text – will be more readable once the shop is lighting it from the inside compared to yellow or oranges (barely any street lighting where it is).

    I’ll take into consideration the white outlines, but is it necessary when it’ll be backlit 99% of the time? I’ve final will have a margin all the way around the etch film to light more light shine through (this copy only has a gap on the roundel, the final will have the text with one as well)

  • Simon Strom

    Member
    October 23, 2009 at 5:19 pm

    I agree with all that’s been said. I think that you could instead of the white in-line stroke on the font you could do a darker gray for that. That way it would still show up, but will be more subtle and not clash with images behind it.

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