Help required with a poster

[Chris Wool]

you are right kevin you forgot to put Hughs name on there 😀

[Jill Marie Welsh]

Must it have a white background?
It just looks very bland and uninviting to me.
I think there is too much use of a casual font as well.
here it is with only a few tweaks.
Love….Jill

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[Kevin Flowers]

Jill
thank you very much, hope you don’t mind i have done a version of your design. Opinions please

Kev

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[Simon Stonuary]

looks good to me kev !

[Lynn Normington]

I liked Jills but yours is an improvement of the first

Lynn

[Martin Cole]

Yep big improvement on your first Kev…

But I like Jill’s, the warm yellow/orange background works really well

[Kevin Flowers]

I like Jills better too, but thought it was bad enough nicking her ideas without just stealing the whole design.

Kev

[Graeme Harrold]

Im sure Jill will be flattered, otherwise she would not have posted……….She is in the UK soon, so poss payment in BEER……….Yup I like Jills design too, very warming and draws you in……..Think in addition to the colour, Jills font choice is softer…….

[John Singh]

Jill has demonstrated that you don’t need the 2nd 3rd 4th
Just 2 3 4 is understandable

But a great improvement on the first

[Kevin Flowers]

quote John Singh:

Jill has demonstrated that you don’t need the 2nd 3rd 4th
Just 2 3 4 is understandable

But a great improvement on the first

John
i know that as soon as i show it to the customer he will ask for them, i’ll have a look at font choice when i’m on the main computer tomorrow

Kev

[John Singh]

I know what you mean Kev
If the customer insists then its no big deal

[Jill Marie Welsh]

Kev feel free to use the whole idea.
But what you did looks far more inviting than the first one. I like how you did the water.
I didn’t think you needed the rd, th, etc.
My header font is a beta from Art & Signfonts called "Truckin".
They are also going to be releasing a font called "Jillbeans" real soon but it’s rather homely.
hahaha
Our Opening Day was just this past weekend, my younger son had a blast fishing for trout.
No problemo, I like it when a man listens to me!
It’s a rare thing.

[Kevin Flowers]

Thanks Jill,
here’s what i’ve got. This is for a opening day at a retail shop just done loads of signs for it will try & post some bits up soon.

Kev

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[Terry Bull]

Sorry Kev,Jill’s has more punch

Terry

[Terry Bull]

No.. just seen your final that’s good too

T

[Jill Marie Welsh]

I wanted to put something down in the black panel on the bottom.
Glad you did!
PS
You also solved the rd and th dilemma nicely!

[Glenn Sharp]

I like that last one Kev……….I think the only thing that niggles me a bit about it is that the text runs too close to the fisherman. I think if you increased the margins slightly (left & right) it would make it just a little bit less cluttered

Looks good though and nice idea Jill 😀