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  • Florists Shopfront Sign – help with design please?

    Posted by JohnMoyles on 2 June 2009 at 16:57

    Hi all,
    I’m doing a flat panel dibond sign for a new florist that’s opening just down the street from me – I’d really like this one to look good as i’ll have to look at it every day!

    The customer has asked me to incorporate a modern floral design and a butterfly if possible (not necessarily the ones i’ve used but something along those lines). The name is ‘Le Fleur’ and ‘prop. g.mulligan’ and ‘t: 087-9888314’ are also to be used.

    I’ve spent some time on this but I’m not happy with where I’m at so if anyone has any ideas / constructive criticism please feel free to contribute!

    all the best,
    John.


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    Peter McGarry replied 16 years, 3 months ago 12 Members · 30 Replies
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  • Kevin Flowers

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    2 June 2009 at 17:05

    most urgent 1st point don’t use that font

    Kev

  • JohnMoyles

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    2 June 2009 at 17:05

    here it is in .ai format


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  • Hugh Potter

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    2 June 2009 at 17:26

    i don’t have ime to have a bash right now but, if they want somehting more moden looking how about the ‘roxy’ / surf flowers? (hybiscus?) just a very simple outline in a very pale colour,

    I agree about the font too, something nice and light, but not too thin or fancy to read!

    i’ll have a go if i get five mins.

    tbh, i don’t mind the flowers you’ve used, but do stay away from that font! prob a less impactive colour too,

    maybe a panzy type flower, two colours, simples!

  • John.MacDonald

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    2 June 2009 at 17:37

    Here’s my input hope it sparks a few ideas off 😀


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  • Hugh Potter

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    2 June 2009 at 17:47

    ok, found 5 mins!

    i think i’d even consider making the flowers to the left more subtle too.

    Hugh


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  • Neil Speirs

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    2 June 2009 at 17:53

    liking Hugh’s

  • Hugh Potter

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    2 June 2009 at 17:58
    quote Neil Speirs:

    liking Hugh’s

    lol, thank you! it always amazes me how i can knock up something i really quite like the look of, in only a matter of minutes, when it’s not for me or my customers!

  • JohnMoyles

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    2 June 2009 at 18:36

    Thanks for all your input guys. John & Hugh – I really appreciate you taking the time to upload your ideas. Do you mind if I show these idea’s to the customer and make up something similar if she decides to go with it? The customer is calling in again tomorrow afternoon.

  • Hugh Potter

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    2 June 2009 at 18:53

    all yours mate,

    Hugh

  • Jill Marie Welsh

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    2 June 2009 at 19:06

    Good one, Hugh.
    Very elegant.
    John, send Hugh a nice container of bait and use his idea.
    If using yours, do not use that font or that color and make the butterfly facing in toward the lettering.
    But I suggest taking Hugh’s idea and running with it.
    Love….Jill

  • Peter Normington

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    2 June 2009 at 20:16

    why do we need to have a french name?

    why not just "the flower(s)"

    sorry, I just think it pretentious to use foreign language in signs, trying to be posh…

    I think hugh has nailed it though.

    Peter

  • Gordon Galloway

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    2 June 2009 at 21:04
    quote :

    why do we need to have a french name?

    why not just “the flower(s)”

    sorry, I just think it pretentious to use foreign language in signs, trying to be posh…

    So they can charge more 😀

    Le Signe Fabricant.

  • Harry Cleary

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    2 June 2009 at 21:05

    Hugh’s first one for me too.

    quote Peter Normington:

    why do we need to have a french name?

    why not just “the flower(s)”

    sorry, I just think it pretentious to use foreign language in signs, trying to be posh…
    Peter

    they are very cosmopolitan in Mayo, Peter. Ever since the Armada 😀

  • Kevin Flowers

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    2 June 2009 at 21:07

    Hi
    Hugh as it spot on, wasn’t being abrupt earlier just didn’t have time to put something up and was dead against that font.

    Kev

  • Jill Marie Welsh

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    2 June 2009 at 21:50

    Here’s a quickie while I’m waiting for dinner to finish cooking.
    Still prefer Hugh’s but wanted to say please no "t."


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  • Chris Wool

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    2 June 2009 at 22:23

    sorry Hugh Jills piped you with that one.

    class

    chris

  • JohnMoyles

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    2 June 2009 at 22:35

    Thanks everyone, that is looking good too Jill. Do you mind if i let the customer see your design as well? She might be spoiled for choice tomorrow!

  • Jill Marie Welsh

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    2 June 2009 at 22:53

    Sure. But I still think Hugh’s is nicer.
    The script I used is a brand new one called Louisiana.
    http://www.fontshop.com/fonts/designer/ … _oliveira/
    The butterfly was just something I Googled.

  • JohnMoyles

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    2 June 2009 at 23:10

    thanks Jill, will let you guys know what the customer decides on.

  • Glenn Sharp

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    3 June 2009 at 07:18

    I didn’t get time to have a go but I think I would have tried something down this route……distressed background with water colour effect flowers


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  • Hugh Potter

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    3 June 2009 at 07:38
    quote Glenn Sharp:

    I didn’t get time to have a go but I think I would have tried something down this route……distressed background with water colour effect flowers

    is that one you made earlier? nice affects!

    I like Jills too, I know yours, Glenn, is prob harder to make, but Jills just works for me!

  • Glenn Sharp

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    3 June 2009 at 07:42

    I wish Hugh

    No, I just googled ‘French Shop signs’ to get some inspiration and I thought that style was quite fitting

  • Harry Cleary

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    3 June 2009 at 08:28

    Thats the style I thought would suit it too Glenn…..quite easy to create that crackle base John.

  • Jill Marie Welsh

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    3 June 2009 at 11:21

    …and now Glenn has to go and post that…
    To me, a hand-painted sign will always be most fitting for an old building.
    But I also like a real modern sign on the face of a nice old shop.

  • JohnMoyles

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    3 June 2009 at 12:10

    The customer has just been in and loved Hugh’s second design (i.e. the one with the black background).
    So thanks everyone for helping me out here.

    Hugh – if your ever in Mayo – I owe you a few pints!
    Thanks again,
    John.

  • Hugh Potter

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    3 June 2009 at 12:27
    quote JohnMoyles:

    The customer has just been in and loved Hugh’s second design (i.e. the one with the black background).
    So thanks everyone for helping me out here.

    Hugh – if your ever in Mayo – I owe you a few pints!
    Thanks again,
    John.

    you’re welcome mate,

    does mayo have a coastline (too lazy to look it up!)? whats the fishing like there? might see you for a pint of the black stuff on the beach!

    Hugh

  • JohnMoyles

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    3 June 2009 at 17:59

    We have miles of it Hugh….. I’d get here quick though if I were you – its the first time we’ve seen hot weather in about 5 years!!!

  • Hugh Potter

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    3 June 2009 at 18:39

    lol, would love to get over, might treat the mrs to a week over there in the autumn.

    cheers,
    Hugh

  • Harry Cleary

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    3 June 2009 at 21:07

    you won’t regret it Hugh….fabulous county…..loads of great beaches and pubs and Mr Moyles is an animal to buy drink by all accounts! 😀

  • Peter McGarry

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    8 July 2009 at 13:47

    Can recommend Enniscrone – Are the seaweed baths still there ?

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