can anyone help with layout for this van?

[Lynn Normington]

first thought, make the spark plug ( if thats what it is) smaller nicer font for name just initial thoughts I’ll think some more

Lynn

[Robert Lambie]

quick reply, kerning on name etc too far apart mate.

ill reply again later, im just in middle of something 😀

[Joe McNamara]

Spark plug is way too big in my humble opinion.

Tighten the kerning on the Garage name, make it bigger, and add a light grey drop shadow.

Phone number needs to be a little bit bigger.

Could you have the spark plug about 300mm high and add a wrench etc (garage type images) in an icon fashion, maybe 4 images on the back wing above the rear wheel.

I hope this makes some sense!

If I have time tomorrow, I’ll re-do it and post what I mean.

Also, what’s the budget?

Cheers
Joe

[Jill Marie Welsh]

I don’t mind the spark plg but I would flip it over the other way and make it a lighter grey.
It looks too "yuppie" for a garage.
The layout needs some balls.
I would make STATION all-caps, tougher font,
and Garage in a loose cool script.
It is a clean layout and nicer than lots that I’ve seen.
I like the phone number placement and spacing.
love….Jill

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[Joe McNamara]

Five minute play…
A different idea from my first..

These astras are a pain – I know – I have one!

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[David Rowland]

that bold font.. what is that Jill?

[Peter Munday]

I like that Joe 😀

[Jill Marie Welsh]

That’s a Mike Stevens font…Big Red I think.
Love….Jill