Advice with my own logo

[Glenn Sharp]

Martin,

Throw a JPEG up so we can all have a look 😀

[Jill Marie Welsh]

Yes please, I tried importing both of em but no dice.
Unfortunately I am not psychic.
hahaha
Love….Jill

[Martin Gray]

That’s better now 😀

---

Attachments:

[Kevin Flowers]

Hi
i would remove the outer serif on the G then angle the other letters to match the slant of that part of the G.

Kev

[Jill Marie Welsh]

Thanks for the jpg.
For starters, it is VERY hard to read.
I would lose the severe slant.
I will post a suggestion after I finish cooking supper.
😉

[Warren Beard]

I’m no pro but think it looks a little old fashioned (not the good old fashion though 😕 ) Simple is good but it looks a bit messy, I would neaten/clean it up a bit, try designing 5 totally different logos and I mean completely different to each other, once you have done this it will start looking much clearer to you 😉

[Graeme Harrold]

Its the first couple of seconds that count and all I can focus on is Rays Raphics……The G is lost. Too much Slant on the lettering, but if you like the slope, change the font to a script. Not sure what the ‘sledge’ thing is underneath. :lol1:

[Kevin Flowers]

Not got many fonts on the laptop but had a quick play

Kev

---

Attachments:

[Jill Marie Welsh]

Not too shabby, Kevin!
Absolutely readable too.
Here are my quick ideas.
I know it’s tempting to use the G as just one letter but I think it’s a bit cheesy. Tried it a few ways (top ones) then tried the G as an icon.
I like to use grey in the name, that’s a bit cliche as well.
😳

---

Attachments:

[Warren Beard]

ignore the fonts but giving the G a shadow and using it as the 2nd colour makes the single G work a bit better (if you insist on using 1 G)

---

Attachments:

[Jill Marie Welsh]

That’s nice too Warren.
Here’s one more before I go and watch hockey.

---

Attachments:

[Graeme Harrold]

quote Jillbeans:

That’s nice too Warren.
Here’s one more before I go and watch hockey.

Thanks, like I need it rubbing in……………….god I miss watching the NHL

[Martin Gray]

Thank you everybody for having a look

Jill i know it mite be cheesy but maybe am that kind of guy 🙄 Thanks for the ideas (food for thought) :lol1:

quote Graeme Harrold:

Its the first couple of seconds that count and all I can focus on is Rays Raphics……The G is lost. Too much Slant on the lettering, but if you like the slope, change the font to a script. Not sure what the ‘sledge’ thing is underneath. :lol1:

I know! The G is total lost I’ve had that problem from the start sometimes u get a idea and it gets stuck in your head and cant get it out :headbang2:

That looks good warren! al take some of ur advice and have a good look at sometime total different over the weekend. and get it up for u guys to have a look at

Thanks again

Martin

[Jill Marie Welsh]

I am cheesy too.
😳
Cheesy can be a good thing.
I am really lucky, the Pens are playing two nights in a row, even tho they lost last night.

[Dave Harrison]

Here’s my 80’s inspired attempt.. . sorry the best I can do at 3am ! Colour wise I’d consider using a mixture of Matt charcoal gray & gloss silver vinyls 😮

---

Attachments:

[Jill Marie Welsh]

Dave that’s damn nice for 3am!
I like the motorcycle-tank-looking one.

[Martin Gray]

Hi Guys/Girls

Ive had a little play about with my logo there a little rough. But i would like your opinion on them and any advice to make it look better

Thanks
Martin

---

Attachments:

[Neil Davey]

Here’s one…….

---

Attachments:

[Martin Gray]

Thanks Neil for putting up your design idea.

More ideas for me 😕 😀

Martin