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  • David Rogers

    Member
    4 December 2013 at 13:29

    I think it maybe lacks a little ‘punch’ or clarity. Sort of reads by what draws the eye "Williams – Signs – and Brown"

    Here’s my 2 minute take on your design – same but different…

    Dave


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  • Nick Minnery

    Member
    4 December 2013 at 14:19

    Hi Dave

    Thanks for taking time out to do those designs, appreciate that.

    Take on board what you say about the order of the words, will bear that in mind mate 😉

  • Andrew.Daniel

    Member
    13 December 2013 at 15:02

    Hey Nick,

    I’m not sure if you have already picked up on it, but I worry about the dark grey in the design on the "&".

    I’m not sure what term one would use to describe what I mean, but in "on screen" terms, the grey and the red are too close in luminance, and it causes a little struggle for the eye, if you could lighten up or darken up the grey it could very well help a lot with that.

    sorry to be a latecomer to this thread!

    Andy

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