can anyone help with this van design please?

[Lynn Normington]

where is it Rich ?

Lynn

[Richard Urquhart]

hi its above you to your left i hope

[Lynn Normington]

it is now Rich

Lynn :lol1:

[Jill Marie Welsh]

I would make “Tiling Services” bigger on the sides than the secondary copy, maybe putting TILING as such and S E R V I C E S in a reverse panel underneath to break it up. (kerned out)
On the back, I would put Tiling Services on the left window, larger,
and the list of services on the right window, left justified and closer together.
And I would get rid of TEL by the phone number.
But that’s just me.
Love….Jill
PS
Is that Brush Script I see? 😮

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[Richard Urquhart]

thanks jill is funny some people just love it i hate it !!!!! is hard to get people to move on
thanks will have a play

[Robert Lambie]

hi rich
did this up quickly based on what you already have mate. not saying there was anything up with it, just thought it needed a bit of ballance/focal ppoint. the name sorta got lost in the details etc.

anyway, like i said, just rejigged what you had for this one rather than trying for my own.

[Richard Urquhart]

nice i like it ,its great to have this sort of input from others i would be lost without the boards im on way to the I.O.W this weekend so i may get time to have a go talking yours and jills suggestions in mind
thanks rich
sad really taking work away but i would sooner do that than watch the rubbish you get of the telly

thanks all
rich