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  • can anyone help with this logo please?

    Posted by Warren Beard on 24 May 2007 at 18:02

    Hi all, me again ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    Seeing as I move this weekend to start my new career full time in this wonderful industry of signage I will need to be buying new business cards with a land line number (I know how you all hate mobile numbers)

    The thing is I want to make my business card a little more exciting but still simple and elegant.

    I am having difficulty with this now so any help will be appreciated.

    attached are ideas but I would like something a little nicer with more of a photographic look.

    I like the smoke design but am stumped to think of any other ideas.

    Help please ๐Ÿ˜•

    cheers

    Warren


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    Warren Beard replied 18 years, 5 months ago 9 Members · 54 Replies
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  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 18:46

    Warren, can you upload an ai of just your logo on it’s own? ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 18:57

    logo attached


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  • Andrew Boyle

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    24 May 2007 at 19:23

    The great type designer, Eric Gill, is credited with saying โ€œhe who would letterspace lower-case text, would steal sheepโ€. (The attribution is probably apocryphal: others are also credited with the remark. Stealing sheep was, in the 19th century, a capital offence in Britain.) As the remark suggests, though, letterspacing of upper-case text is less awful a crime; the technique used also to be used for emphasis of text set in Fraktur (or similar) fonts.

    I think this applies even more to a script font….the spacing on the back of your car is increased however is not as bad because of the outline….

    Sorry for being blunt, but I think changing it would be better…

    Cheers

  • Jill Marie Welsh

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    24 May 2007 at 19:38

    Thank you Andrew…I admire you even more than ever.
    Warren, the back is crammed, and the script is very weak throughout.
    Is your tagline grammatically correct?
    You might try a vertical layout for the back.
    I would drop the logo down further into the body of the card.
    The smoke thing reminds me of dirty exhaust!
    ๐Ÿ™‚
    Love….Jill

  • Richard Urquhart

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    24 May 2007 at 19:42

    hi mate what about a nice image behind the text and lifting it a bit with a bevel like this

    rich


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  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 19:55

    Hi Rich

    I really like that text, looks good and keeps with my logo design nicely.

    I might ask you for the EPS of that if you don’t mind ๐Ÿ˜ณ

    I also took the other advise supplied for the reverse as attached, any better ? (?)

    cheers guys

    Warren


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  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 19:56

    Whilst I think the smoke is interesting, it bears no relation to the company name nor the service you provide, so I’d lose it. I agree entirely that the script is all wrong, the spacing especially is very wrong.

    I also think a more simple font for the name number etc would be better.

    Here’s an idea although this isn’t right either ……….
    But I think it needs a new script font and a softer font for your name etc.


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  • Richard Urquhart

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    24 May 2007 at 19:58

    i just imported in to adobe p/s and rasterized it and added a bevel so i dont have an eps sorry i do like the colours and look of the bevel if you want i could have a play when i have more time , we will see what turns up in this thread
    thanks rich

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 20:04

    Marcella, I like that very much thank you, it is very much my sort of style as well (when I don’t have mental blockage :lol1: ) Simple, creative and effective.

    Rich, you are right about PS, I will create something myself but will wait and see what inspiration I get here.

    Thanks both.

    Warren

  • Andrew Boyle

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    24 May 2007 at 20:17

    >>

    for web

    ๐Ÿ˜‰


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  • Richard Urquhart

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    24 May 2007 at 20:19

    Andrew once again top class love it !!!

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 21:03

    Looks good Andrew, thanks.

    Do you have any ideas for a layout as my brain is sizzled ๐Ÿ˜•

    In regards to Marcella’s design I was wondering what the Grey vignette will look like printed digital and will it cause the white reversed text to be jagged? Sorry I have a litho and flexo print background and not too much digital experience.

    cheers

    Warren

  • Andrew Boyle

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    24 May 2007 at 21:54

    For a good SIGN call……. 078899

    will try something sensible…..


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  • Robert Lambie

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    24 May 2007 at 21:56

    can we not call it "Drop it signs" now? ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 21:58

    :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    it would get your company noticed Warren!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:08

    What about a bloke on the other side so there is something for everyone ?

    Got to keep all types of custmers happy ๐Ÿ˜‰

    I’m liking that ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

  • Andrew Boyle

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    24 May 2007 at 22:10

    Hold Ups are also stockings so maybe the guy could be in stockings….that would get it noticed!

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:10

    OK ………. Andrew kit off ‘hold up’ a sign, take the pic and get designing on the other side! :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

  • Andrew Boyle

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    24 May 2007 at 22:11

    I posted toooooooo fast……lend me a pair (?) sorry Warren this is going off tangent.

  • Lynn Normington

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    24 May 2007 at 22:12

    Warren if you are going to put all that on the back of your card, are you going to supply magnifiers as well?? you really could condense that to "all you signage needs" and may be add vehicles etc; sorry it’s late and I am tired. ๐Ÿ™„

    Lynn

  • Robert Lambie

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    24 May 2007 at 22:12
    quote Warren Beard:

    What about a bloke on the other side so there is something for everyone ?

    what about they flip the card over the she is a guy from the front! ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:13
    quote Andrew Boyle:

    I posted toooooooo fast……lend me a pair (?) sorry Warren this is going off tangent.

    :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    Rob ……………. you’re sick. Only you would think of a ladyboy!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:15
    quote Robert Lambie:

    quote Warren Beard:

    What about a bloke on the other side so there is something for everyone ?

    what about they flip the card over the she is a guy from the front! ๐Ÿ˜‰

    :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    This is a sign company right :lol1: :lol1:

    Me love you long time ten dollar $$$$$$

  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 22:18

    Warren,
    Just a doodle mate. Any good?

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:21

    well ………….. there’s something I thought I’d never see …………. Karl taking a thread BACK to being sensible! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

  • Andrew Boyle

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    24 May 2007 at 22:22

    Karl, thanks for getting it back on track…. ๐Ÿ˜€


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  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:22

    Hi Karl

    Very very nice mate, I do like it but not sure if the logo looks too different from original and I lose my identity. It is definitely something I could draw inspiration from as it is an awesome design.

    Thanks mate

    Warren

  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 22:23

    Marcella, You make me think I’m the only nutter on here! ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:26

    Karl ………… yes you’re a nutter but this evening Andrew is stealing your crown! :rofl:

    ‘thinking outside the box’ ………………. :lol1: Andrew! :lol1:

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:27
    quote KARL WILLIAMS:

    Marcella, You make me think I’m the only nutter on here! ๐Ÿ˜€

    Karl, just remember the saying "It takes one to know one!" :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    but thanks for getting it back on track, I go full time now and have to get this right, every day I poo a little thinking about what I am in store for ๐Ÿ˜ฎ :lol1:

    cheers

    Warren

  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 22:28

    With artwork like that he can steal from me all night! ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Robert Lambie

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    24 May 2007 at 22:29
    quote Warren Beard:

    every day I poo a little

    dont mince with your words mate! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

    :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    ok lets get this thread back on crack… i mean track ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

    taxi for lambie! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

    .

  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 22:29

    She looks like she has a very nice box to me! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:31

    :lol1: oh this thread has lost it. :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    Sorry Warren. But among the madness someone may have a moment of inspiration!

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:33
    quote Marcella:

    :lol1: oh this thread has lost it. :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    Sorry Warren. But among the madness someone may have a moment of inspiration!

    Doubt it :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: I think all that is left on here are nutters, pissed people and of course the most popular…….pissed nutters :lol1:

    Tomorrows another day………maybe Andrew will have some more pictures to share ๐Ÿ˜›

  • Harry Cleary

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    24 May 2007 at 22:33
    quote Marcella:

    Sorry Warren. But among the madness someone may have a moment of inspiration!

    Where’s Elsewhere when you need him!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:35

    Who’s Elsewhere ?

    .

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:35

    Elsewhere’s elsewhere (!)

    .

  • Warren Beard

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    24 May 2007 at 22:36

    see what I did there :lol1:

  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 22:37

    Just one more then!

  • Robert Lambie

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    24 May 2007 at 22:46

    a very basic layout using andrews embossed logo….
    i only have about ten fonts on this system so dont be too hard on me :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    .

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:47
    quote Robert Lambie:

    dont be too hard on me :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

    .

    that’s sh1te Robert.

  • Robert Lambie

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    24 May 2007 at 22:50

    ohh buttuck butter (puppy-eyes)

    ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:50

    :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 22:51

    Sorry, I want me crown back! ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Marcella Ross

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    24 May 2007 at 22:52

    desperate measures! :lol1:

  • Harry Cleary

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    24 May 2007 at 22:53

    What about this???? ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€


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  • Karl Williams

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    24 May 2007 at 23:12

    Just can’t help myself! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

  • Warren Beard

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    25 May 2007 at 06:55

    Karl pulling it down in to the gutter ๐Ÿ˜ฎ :lol1:

    I like your one Rob, will the text be big enough? and how well will the 3D text look when printed so small? Will it be worth it doing beveled logo if the effect is lost?

    Oh man my brain is still hurting from last night ๐Ÿ˜Ž :lol1:

    Thanks all

    Warren

  • Richard Urquhart

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    25 May 2007 at 11:32

    Karl although you may find using a photo of my sister funny i dont please can you ask her next time before posting her photo!!!

  • Karl Williams

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    25 May 2007 at 11:47

    Sorry mate, I’ll ask your permission next time.
    Good looker though aint she! ๐Ÿ˜€

  • Warren Beard

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    25 May 2007 at 12:53

    I hope you are talking about the hot chick and not the voluptuous one ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

    How’s that for politically correct terminology ? :lol1:

  • Karl Williams

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    25 May 2007 at 12:56

    I’m talking about Jabba The Hutt! OOOOHHHHH BBBBBaaaaaBBBBBYYYYYY! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • Warren Beard

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    25 May 2007 at 13:37
    quote KARL WILLIAMS:

    I’m talking about Jabba The Hutt! OOOOHHHHH BBBBBaaaaaBBBBBYYYYYY! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

    :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:

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