can anyone help with layout on delivery vehicle?

[Richard Urquhart]

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[Richard Urquhart]

hi did any one manage to have a look at this for me
thanks rich

[Bill Dewison]

Nothing wrong with that design Rich, looks bloody good actually! 😀 Can’t help you with the logo atm, I’ll give you a tinkle in a bit if I find it.

Cheers, Dewi

[Richard Urquhart]

thanks dewi ,did you think the black text looks wrong on the phone number ?

[Bill Dewison]

Phone number looks fine, its a nice, clean design and it works well for the shape of the vehicle in my opinion.

What does this fair trade logo look like? Is it the one with the scales?

Cheers, Dewi

[Richard Urquhart]

sure thing mate there is an american one on brands of the world other than that im lost

[Andrew Ritchie]

it looks fine, but i think the cab door looks a little cluttered, but i i cant give true comment on visual as its a little pixalated. sorry.

[Shane Drew]

quote VectorWise:

it looks fine, but i think the cab door looks a little cluttered, but i i cant give true comment on visual as its a little pixalated. sorry.

Tend to agree. How big is the byline text going to be? Seems too small to serve any purpose.

Does the client only want it on the 1 door, or can you spread it out over the back door too?

If so, I’d move the building and roofing specialists to the rear door(?) and use bullet points to make them stand out.

I don’t know the vehicle over here, so I have no idea what it looks like in real life – sorry, but that is just my thought.

Cheers
Shane

[Steve Coyle]

The design lots fine. I’ld be happy if it was mine

[Richard Urquhart]

thanks all i will have a play about and let you know how i get on ,its so nice having more opinions

thanks rich

[Bill Dewison]

Rich, did you get this one sorted in the end?

Cheers, Dewi

[Richard Urquhart]

lesson 1 don’t play about doing a design with out knowing if the customer will ever come back

all parts of a learning curve
rich

[Bill Dewison]

Blimey mate, I know that one 😕 I never learn that lesson, no matter how many times I’m told, I just keeping designing stuff and filing it when they don’t come back 🙁 On the bright side though, occassionally they do come back and the design is ready done 😀

Cheers, Dewi

[Shane Drew]

Rich, just view it as practise mate.

Nothing like doing a ‘real’ design to keep your eye in.

I look at it this way; every concept I design, gives me more experience. The more experience, the better I get.

Just trying to put a positive spin on it mate.

Cheers
Shane