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can anyone give me a few pointers on how to improve this?
Hi all can anyone give me a few pointers or ideas on how to improve this a little, please
cheers
stephen
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Get rid of the background print and just sign write it…
Fussy backgrounds when trying to convey a message just don’t mix.
To me there’s way too much corny text on there.
It just needs garage name, vehicle servicing, phone (leave off the "Tel") and web address if going with the print. -
vans are not really my thing but what hits me is that it is far too busy…
The text seems a bit disjointed…..the "find us on….." is too far away from the related information…….."Looking for a reputable garage" looks wrong split by the break light.
On the right hand side door you have a mixture of upper & lowercase which looks odd
I think if it was me I would decrease the size of all the text slightly & group the relevant information together…..then fade out the background image slightly so it is not clashing with all the information
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morning chaps, thanks for the comments.
i’ll have a play with those ideas
cheers
stephen
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