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signage: assortment
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Not sure if you are after critique or not, so no offence intended if not
Ill delete this after if you like. 😀The Funeral directors is nice, but the main company name is too high and too close to the border, I would have put the & sons down and to the right and smaller this way the Mcallum & Tritton would have lined up with the rest of the sign, it also looks double spaced between the 2 names and the ampersand.
The van looks fine apart for maybe the spacing in between the 3 logos on the back.Hairdressers window.
What happened there with all the different fonts?
I counted 8 or 9 I think,there’ss a little odd spacing between the Russian & European compared to the other 2, and the special discounts looks squashed.
And is that brush script with spaces between the letters?Still if the customer was happythat’ss the main thing, and sometimes they even insist on using their design so hands are tied, I know.
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They are fine for starters but next time try to keep the copy away from the borders.
The spacing could be much tighter between the ampersand on the funeral sign, and the text spacing could all be tighter to itself than to the edges if you get my drift.
Try to give your copy breathing room.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Love….Jill -
Out of interest
what are the letters made from on the funeral directors?, they look very well finished.
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