Learning Driver layout

[Mo Gillis-Coates]

So what’s wrong with that?… looks fine to me….. simple and to the point… don’t over work it…

the only changes i would think about doing would be to perhaps, get rid of the larger caps at the begging of Driving and School (it makes it look unbalanced to me) and rotate the L and the square about 20 degrees left to put it on the skew which will negate the optical illusion you are having where the L looks like a different size from the rest of the letters…. pop a hole in each corner of the "L" plate and Roberts Your Relative!

BUT……….. You may want to have a go at correcting the teeeny tiny spelling mistake u have there 😉

I like it!

[Martin Gray]

whoops… i was so concentrating on the name i never seen that! i dont know it just doesn’t read right to me. Ive e-mailed the proof to the customer so we will have to see if he likes it.

Thanks Mo.

Martin

[Mo Gillis-Coates]

No problem, I think if you tilted the L it would look better and also made the driving school letters all the same height, changed the range kerning on the driving school to space them out a little and stretch it across the red bar a little more it would look better….. and i would maybe increase the gap a tad between all three layout components so it didn’t look so claustrophobic it might do the job.

I would show u what i mean but I don’t have any design progs on my notebook. unfortnately spelling is also my downfall…. did I ever tell you about the mistake I made on a sign that was supposed to read "Harrisons Clock Makers"?

[Martin Gray]

Ok i will have a play with it tomorrow. no what happened?

Martin