coach design help

[David Hammond]

Personally the ‘swish’ doesn’t appear to flow.

The logo running over the windows too. Will passengers like having their view obscured?

I’ve had a quick play around with it, still not 100% with the ‘swish’ at the back.

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[Jill Marie Welsh]

Here’s my take, agree with the swooshy thing not flowing…I like the plain stripe idea better but saw it after I did this.
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Thought a more updated script might look better too.

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[George Elsmore]

thanks for input I forgot to say 😳 needs to bee greens and gold solid vinyls, I do have a large format printer and suggested blends etc but he wants solid vinyls also i did a design with a straight band all the way arond but it was not liked the swoosh thing is something I thought of but i am up to getting rid if need be

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keep em coming 😀

[Martin Cole]

I don’t like the swoosh’s George… bin em

here’s mine with logo in contravision where on windows

I hope hes got deep pockets

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[Jill Marie Welsh]

Now that’s more like it.
Martinis for everyone!

[David Hammond]

I like the logo at the rear Martin.

Maybe move the Group Travel Ltd to the front in place of British & European coach holidays?

Or maybe bring the web address up above the green bands? Just to fill in the empty space between the wheel arches?

[John O'Sullivan]

quote Martin Cole:

I hope hes got deep pockets

on the costs did you mean the design or the tour guide you included!! 😀 😀

[HarveyShaw]

My take on things……

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[George Elsmore]

Cheers people some food for thought keep em coming for another 24 hours 😀

[Steve Hooper]

I quite enjoy seeing something ‘clever’ on the back of coaches etc. rather than just the logo. Something that is memorable for the message or humour.

Probably not a lot of help but my 2p worth. 🙂